This is a killer who shows up in quite a few of my stories. He started out as a character in the Nocent series, named Daniel Reese. Giving Daniel a background was the fun part. I had to give him a history that involved the Varson brothers, as well as a motive for killing. In a future blog I will go into detail about his connection to the Varsons, but this is about him.
I don't know where it was that I read that pigs are good swimmers, but that got me thinking. In the Bible, when Jesus transferred Legion out of the man and into the herd of 2,000 pigs, they all ran down a hill and into some water and supposedly drowned. Well, if they were such good swimmers, why the heck would they drown like that? What if, after Jesus left, the owner of the herd went down to see his pigs and became possessed by Legion?
Okay, well, since Legion was in a whole herd of 2,000 pigs, it would only be one of the demons who actually possessed the pigherder. It might then become his obsession to regain the full company of his Legion of demons. My idea is that he killed his first victim the day Jesus was crucified. Then, every year on the anniversary of that day, he killed one more person. Once he reached two thousand, he would be at his full strength. Supposing that Jesus was around 33 when he was crucified, that would make it about 2033 when Legion was able to be his worst. Anyway, that's my story and I'm stickin to it.
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Showing posts with label killer. Show all posts
Showing posts with label killer. Show all posts
Thursday, November 25, 2010
Monday, November 22, 2010
Femur Killer
This is an idea I came up with in the mid-nineties when I was in college: a serial killer who bludgeons his victim with the femur of his last victim, cuts off a leg, then disappears into the night. One day I was listening to the song "My Soul Flayed Bare" on the album, Shadows by the band, Creepmime. The guitar part that plays during the chorus was really catchy and I got it stuck in my head. I started to hear words in my head going along with the rhythm of the riff. I wrote out these words and a poem called Bludgeon was born.
Bludgeon by Paul Loh
First of all I'll make you a memory
In a way that makes them remember me
And I use the same M.O. every time
I'm a creature of habit and only I
know of where the parts that are missing are
Once you're gone my next victim will I stalk
With your femur shall I hit them from behind
And with a hack saw their leg shall I take away
When the cops come, your femur I'd left behind
the murder weapon and victim is what they'll find
with his leg gone and I shall be far away
so this cycle continues another day
Years later, I had an idea for a story, but I wanted a really twisted killer as the bad guy. I thumbed through my box of old writing and found this poem. It had the makings of a good character, but he needed some background. What is his motivation? What got him started on this twisted path? Then it struck me: what if he's a masochistic empath/empathic masochist? The greatest thrill in his life was the day he accidentally lost his leg. He kept his leg and, once he recovered from his injury, he hungered to feel that rush again. He had always been able to feel other people's pain so he used his own femur to render someone unconscious. He sawed off his victim's leg, relishing every agonizingly orgasmic sensation. He vicariously intensifies his phantom feelings. I still get chills even thinking about it!
Bludgeon by Paul Loh
First of all I'll make you a memory
In a way that makes them remember me
And I use the same M.O. every time
I'm a creature of habit and only I
know of where the parts that are missing are
Once you're gone my next victim will I stalk
With your femur shall I hit them from behind
And with a hack saw their leg shall I take away
When the cops come, your femur I'd left behind
the murder weapon and victim is what they'll find
with his leg gone and I shall be far away
so this cycle continues another day
Years later, I had an idea for a story, but I wanted a really twisted killer as the bad guy. I thumbed through my box of old writing and found this poem. It had the makings of a good character, but he needed some background. What is his motivation? What got him started on this twisted path? Then it struck me: what if he's a masochistic empath/empathic masochist? The greatest thrill in his life was the day he accidentally lost his leg. He kept his leg and, once he recovered from his injury, he hungered to feel that rush again. He had always been able to feel other people's pain so he used his own femur to render someone unconscious. He sawed off his victim's leg, relishing every agonizingly orgasmic sensation. He vicariously intensifies his phantom feelings. I still get chills even thinking about it!
Tuesday, November 9, 2010
A little about my blog
I am the author of a zombies vs. vampires novel called The Nocent part 2: Advent of the Scathing. My wife bought us a bumper sticker for our car which says, "I'd Rather Be Killing Zombies". I work on a Navy base and every time we pass through the gate, the gate guards see our sticker. We have earned the nickname Zombie Killers.
I am always in the process of writing new stories, including the sequel to my first novel. It's working title is The Nocent part 3: Revenant War. This blog is for the purpose of sharing with the world some of my crazy ideas. The name of my blogsite, Necrolepsy, comes from one of those crazy ideas. One day I was thinking about A Nightmare On Elm Street and the fact that people were afraid to fall asleep because they might be killed. I came up with the idea: what if instead of becoming a victim when you sleep, you become a killer? I made up a name for such an affliction: Necrolepsy. It can also be called Somnihilism.
Needless to say, that very concept is the premise of a new story of mine. Most of my stories are short, but I have several novels in the works. I plan to publish a compilation of my short stories along with my book-length stories. I also have a bunch of children's books I've written (not zombie-related).
I am always in the process of writing new stories, including the sequel to my first novel. It's working title is The Nocent part 3: Revenant War. This blog is for the purpose of sharing with the world some of my crazy ideas. The name of my blogsite, Necrolepsy, comes from one of those crazy ideas. One day I was thinking about A Nightmare On Elm Street and the fact that people were afraid to fall asleep because they might be killed. I came up with the idea: what if instead of becoming a victim when you sleep, you become a killer? I made up a name for such an affliction: Necrolepsy. It can also be called Somnihilism.
Needless to say, that very concept is the premise of a new story of mine. Most of my stories are short, but I have several novels in the works. I plan to publish a compilation of my short stories along with my book-length stories. I also have a bunch of children's books I've written (not zombie-related).
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